Urgent! EC Blog

     After completing the five part paragraph on To Kill a Mockingbird, I realized that I needed to work on choosing the right concrete diction to support in the commentary. I kept this in mind while writing this five part paragraph on "Shoulders" by Naomi Shahib Nye and chose my concrete diction very carefully. I read the peice through multiple times, understood what I was to support and kept my opinions open. I finally came to the conclution of which concrete details to use and was satisfied. They supported my main point, and I had many different options on what to support. This led my commentary to be fairly succesful as well. Therefore reading my own critique on the first paragraph really helped me to develop my second one.